How to be concieted editorial

Ive re-done the How To Be Concieted editorial illustration. The orginal looked like this:

How To Be Concieted version 1

The feedback on this piece was that the concept worked but the way the image was drawn gave it a look more suited to a childrens book than an newspaper article so I revisited the image and this is the second version:

How To Be Concieted version 2

Ive changed a lot about the image, ive taken out the body, changed the character from female to male and changed their features. I also worked into this image a lot more on the computer than the original but I think it was worth redoing and and I would hope the second image would appeal to the target audience much better. Ive included a comparision between the two along with the article below:

How To Be Concieted comparison

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